Post by hitoshi on Mar 26, 2007 20:07:56 GMT 1
okies - this is the beginning of a storyscript i wrote for a RPG-game
LadyFox meant i could post it here, so here it comes ^^"
Storyscript for RPG:
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Content:
1. Characters
- Jineil (m, 20yrs)
- Ulessas (m, 24yrs)
- Cessan (a.k.a.Dante, m, 19yrs)
- Lisianthus (f, ?yrs)
2. Prologue
3. Main Story
- Beginning
- Trigger of the Journey
- Journey (Quests)
- Final Boss(es?)
4. Epilogue
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Forehand-work (collecting ideas):
Main Character: Cessan (Dante)
Cessan is of a race of winged humans. He lives in a little
mountain village far away from any big city.
Cessan is always "cool", strong (but overestimates himself
what brings him big trouble sometimes) and he has at first
no interest in girls (changes later on).
Beginning of the Story:
Cessan (14yrs) lives in a small village near a volcano together with his parents and his older
brother Ulessas (19yrs). Ulessas suffers from shizophrenia and his second self wants to go out
into the world to save the world from evil. No one knows what he means by "evil" but anyways his
parents don't want him to leave theĀ“village. One day Ulessas second self gets into a fight with
the parents. Ulessas made his way to the summit of the volcano. His parents notice the missing
of their older son late, so they hurry up following him. Cessan wants to go too, but they forbid
him. In the end Cessan decides to follow them secretly.
The Parents catch up with Ulessas in the air right over the crater. Cessan stands at the border
and watches the scene. Meanwhile the villagepeople arrive at the scene in search of Cessan, but
can only watch how Ulessas tries to get rid of his parents who try to subdue him.
Cessan isn't able to watch any longer, unfolds his never before used wings and tries to fly up
to his parents and his older brother. His parents notice Cessan and turn around, but then Ulessas
sees a chance and pushes his parents away. Weakened through strong wind and the attacks of their
son, both parents collapse and fall down the crater hole. Ulessas gets himself onto ground and
flees. Cessan, whose wings can't hold him in the air, collapses as well but "only" scratches
along the inner border of the crater hole. He is lucky to not fall for long time, but his wings
take severe damage. The villagepeople can only rescue him from where he lied and take care of him.
Because of this, Cessan lost one of his wings.
5 years later...
Hope it isn't too much to read for you guys >.<
i'm looking forward to critics from you ^^
人志
LadyFox meant i could post it here, so here it comes ^^"
Storyscript for RPG:
---------------------------------------------------------
Content:
1. Characters
- Jineil (m, 20yrs)
- Ulessas (m, 24yrs)
- Cessan (a.k.a.Dante, m, 19yrs)
- Lisianthus (f, ?yrs)
2. Prologue
3. Main Story
- Beginning
- Trigger of the Journey
- Journey (Quests)
- Final Boss(es?)
4. Epilogue
---------------------------------------------------------
Forehand-work (collecting ideas):
Main Character: Cessan (Dante)
Cessan is of a race of winged humans. He lives in a little
mountain village far away from any big city.
Cessan is always "cool", strong (but overestimates himself
what brings him big trouble sometimes) and he has at first
no interest in girls (changes later on).
Beginning of the Story:
Cessan (14yrs) lives in a small village near a volcano together with his parents and his older
brother Ulessas (19yrs). Ulessas suffers from shizophrenia and his second self wants to go out
into the world to save the world from evil. No one knows what he means by "evil" but anyways his
parents don't want him to leave theĀ“village. One day Ulessas second self gets into a fight with
the parents. Ulessas made his way to the summit of the volcano. His parents notice the missing
of their older son late, so they hurry up following him. Cessan wants to go too, but they forbid
him. In the end Cessan decides to follow them secretly.
The Parents catch up with Ulessas in the air right over the crater. Cessan stands at the border
and watches the scene. Meanwhile the villagepeople arrive at the scene in search of Cessan, but
can only watch how Ulessas tries to get rid of his parents who try to subdue him.
Cessan isn't able to watch any longer, unfolds his never before used wings and tries to fly up
to his parents and his older brother. His parents notice Cessan and turn around, but then Ulessas
sees a chance and pushes his parents away. Weakened through strong wind and the attacks of their
son, both parents collapse and fall down the crater hole. Ulessas gets himself onto ground and
flees. Cessan, whose wings can't hold him in the air, collapses as well but "only" scratches
along the inner border of the crater hole. He is lucky to not fall for long time, but his wings
take severe damage. The villagepeople can only rescue him from where he lied and take care of him.
Because of this, Cessan lost one of his wings.
5 years later...
Hope it isn't too much to read for you guys >.<
i'm looking forward to critics from you ^^
人志